| A DOORWAY |
by
A. Capen
|
"With you, take Obi-Wan." urged Yoda.
Qui-Gon was getting rather annoyed with
Yoda. Qui-Gon felt that he wasn't ready for another padawan -- and
felt that perhaps he shouldn't ever have another padawan. Not after
the failure of his last one.
But Yoda was getting increasingly persistent.
Yoda wasn't going to allow
his favorite to forever blame himself for the fall of Xanatos, and
he knew
that Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan would make a good team. Yoda, Obi-Wan
and Qui-Gon
had often gone to places together either as training missions for Obi-Wan,
or recreational. Obi-Wan liked Qui-Gon, and looked up to him.
But this mission was one that Qui-Gon felt was too dangerous for an
eleven
year old padawan, even if the subject of the mission was just a rumor.
"The boy will be safe, I doubt not." said Yoda,
referring to the fact that
two Jedi Masters were going on this mission: Qui-Gon himself
and Plo Koon.
Yoda will not be denied his wishes.
Qui-Gon sighed. "Oh right. We'll take
him with us."
"Tell him to get ready, I will." and with a look of satisfaction, Yoda
headed for Obi-Wan's friend Janell's room where he knew Obi-Wan to
be.
Plo Koon, a Master who often fought along side Qui-Gon in battle, smiled
sympathetically and said, "Yoda is right, you know."
Qui-Gon scowled at the floor and grunted.
"Yoda lost a few to the Dark side," said Koon, "and
he didn't throw up his
hands and give up. Those failures weren't his fault. Xanatos
wasn't your
fault. People who are ruled by the darkness in their souls are
always
blaming other people; or more cowardly still -- blame things or objects."
"I know." replied Qui-Gon. "I know deep in
my heart that his fall wasn't
really my fault. But I can't help but feel that I had done something
wrong."
"Yes, that's typical. And people like Xanatos
know that and take full
advantage of it to do further harm."
Qui-Gon sighed and nodded his head.
They were silent now; waiting for the arrival of Obi-Wan. As
Qui-Gon
thought about Obi-Wan, a memory was triggered -- the memory of when
Yoda
chose Qui-Gon to be his padawan.
He was a two year old crumbcruncher
playing in the Temple nursery. He
had commandeered a toy from a fellow Jedi tot, but immediately after,
a
Master took the toy away from him and gave it back to the other.
Qui-Gon
sat down, or plopped down, on his behind and started pitching a crying
fit.
Almost immediately, he saw
Yoda stand in front of him, and with eyes
wide-round, Yoda went "oooooaaaaaaaaooohhhhhh!!!" in a way that conveyed
the
question: 'So you think you're the center of the Universe, do
you?' Along
with that sound, was a kind of a chortling/clucking sound that
he made at
the back of his tongue, a lot like the sound a lizard might make.
Its
affect soothed Qui-Gon. His feeling of anguish seemed to melt
away as he
looked at Yoda through teary eyes. As Qui-Gon calmed down, he
focused on
Yoda's nose. He thought that Yoda's nose was cute, and he pushed
it gently
with his finger. Something clicked between them, and it was that
moment
that Yoda decided to choose him as his next padawan. He had been
without a
padawan at that time; his one prior to that was now a Jedi Knight.
Qui-Gon's thoughts turned to Praea and the last time he and Yoda were
there. It was just a week before Qui-Gon was to take his final
test to
become a Knight, and he and Master Yoda were on Praea for a politically
social visit. When they were introduced to the Duchess of Teakham,
she
responded to Yoda as if he were a little child. She picked him
up under his
arms and brought him eye level. "Oh he's so cute!!" Then
she hugged him
and kissed him on the nose.
"An old man am I!" exclaimed Yoda.
"Oh that doesn't matter! You're just so darling!"
She placed him against
her shoulder and gently patted his back as if she were trying to burp
him.
Qui-Gon tried to hide his mirth, but when Yoda did, in fact, burp,
Qui-Gon
could not contain it any longer and laughed hard. Yoda looked
at him with
reproach and zapped him with gentle jolts of energy. Qui-Gon
could not stop
laughing though, and his laughter was interspersed with exclamations
of "ouch".
The sound of Obi-Wan entering the room broke Qui-Gon's reminiscence,
and he
couldn't help but smile as he gazed at the bright-eyed padawan.
"Ready to go?" asked Qui-Gon to Obi-Wan.
"Yes, sir."
They boarded the ship and took off toward the planet
Praea.
Praea was home to an old medievalisk society of indigenous
humanoids who
were allowed to technically advance at their own pace, and not have
outworld
technologies and mores thrust upon them. And they mostly confined
their
periods of war and peace to themselves. They were not, however,
unfriendly
people, and they welcomed visitors, newcomers and tourists. They
gave an
especially warm welcome to the Jedi when they landed, for the problem
for
which they asked for Jedi had not been able to be solved by their own
people, exorcists or psychics. And it was particularly troublesome.
It started out as just a strange tale going around
in a town, and it was,
for a while, easily dismissed by reasonable people, about a frightening
body
or image that would venture out from a crypt at night. Only a
few people,
at first, saw the image, and they were laughed at; accused of trying
to
create sensation, or were on some kind of hallucinogen. But as
time went
by, more and more people witnessed the macabre image, then finally,
the
vicar and the mayor saw it.
The reception for the Jedi was a large one.
Even though the problem
centered around a relatively small town, denizens from all over the
region
and beyond traveled to the town to see both the ghostly image and to
see the
Jedi. A barricade had to be set up to allow the Jedi to be escorted
to the
best inn where rooms were reserved for their visit. Most people
were awed
by the Jedi, but others did not see what the hubbub was about -- two
men and
a boy in plain, dark robes. They were expecting something a bit
more
flashy, such as armor or heraldic bearings or shields. Weren't
these
knights? These Jedi looked more like monks.
After the Jedi were shown their rooms, they were
treated to a nice lunch on
a terrace. The view from the terrace was beautiful. The
buildings were of
stone masonry or wattle and daub. Newer streets were smoothly
paved, while
older streets were cobble-stoned. Beyond the town was a paradise
of scenic
farms and forests
The Jedi wished to walk to the old cemetery where
the haunted crypt was,
after they ate.
It was Autumn on that part of the world, and the
trees wore brilliant hues
of gold, reds, browns and greens. The brook that ran through
the village,
then through a grove past the cemetery, sparkled in the warm sun like
a path
of diamonds.
When the group, led by the mayor, reached the cemetery,
the vicar came out
to greet them. With him was his pet tembi, a large friendly dog-like
creature named Tulu. After introducing himself and Tulu to the
Jedi, he led
them past ornate head markers and statues of angels and strange creatures
guarding the bones of the dead. A sprinkling of fallen, multicolored
leaves
adorned most. The group's trek ended at a natural cave that had
been made
into a crypt.
"This is where the hideous thing comes out of at
night." said the vicar.
"We looked in there for signs of occupancy by a
ne'er-do-well or a hobo, but
nothing was there except for the caskets. Nothing was out of
place or out
of the ordinary. This entrance is the only way in or out, and
the lock has
not been broken."
"May we see inside?" asked Qui-Gon.
"Certainly." The vicar chose a large key from
the set he was carrying, and
unlocked the heavy, iron-banded wooden door. Sunlight entered
the crypt as
the door was opened, and everything looked peaceful. Qui-Gon
and Plo Koon
stepped inside, with Obi-Wan following. There were four caskets,
each atop
its own dais made of stone steps. Several other stepped dais
were built in
the room, empty, reserved for family members. There was some kind of
energy
there. A quiet energy that felt like a presence had been there,
and was now
gone.
Plo Koon turned toward the vicar. "Does anyone
else besides you have a key
to this place?"
"The only other key is in the possession of the
family that owns this
crypt. But I really don't think that the creature we saw was
any of them.
It's just not mortal enough. It would be impossible."
The Jedi knew that what the vicar was saying was
true. It did not feel
like anybody -- alive -- was pulling a prank.
Qui-Gon asked, "Is there anything else we should
see before tonight?"
The vicar shook his head. "The image always
centers around this place. It
always looks like it's coming out of this crypt."
The Jedi exited out of the crypt, and walked around
it and its vicinity
while the vicar closed and locked the crypt's door. None of the
energies
around and about seemed out of the ordinary, or at least, not what
the
locals would be afraid of.
That night, near the crypt, a rectangular table with
chairs was set up.
Mugs of hot chocolate were on the table as the three Jedi and a few
town
officials sat around it, waiting for the time that the image usually
appeared. No light source was used except by that of the two
small moons.
Obi-Wan was standing a little apart from the table, examining some
of the
artistic carvings of the statues. The elder Jedi kept an eye
on him, making
sure he didn't wander too far. They didn't have to worry about
it though,
because when the mayor started elaborating on the tale of the ghostly
image,
Obi-Wan and his curiosity headed back to the table, eager to hear the
story.
It was almost as fun as listening to the ghost stories
around the camp fire
during wilderness training missions. Obi-Wan loved wilderness
training
missions. The trip would involve junior padawans going to a chosen
planet
to learn about different terrain, and search and rescue, plants and
animals,
what could be used as food, and what is poison for most humanoids.
The day
would usually end around a campfire under the stars, roasting delicious
treats while the elders told spooky stories -- especially fun when
those
stories were actual experiences.
As time went by, and the major's story progressed,
peppered with
embellishments from some other people around the table, Qui-Gon felt
the
atmosphere get heavy. It also felt as though a dark spirit had
flown into
the crypt like an invisible bolt of lighting. Qui-Gon looked
at Plo Koon
and knew that he felt the same thing. The sinister feeling must
have been
heavy enough for some of the regular folk to feel, because the mayor,
who
most likely recognized the feeling from his past experience, suddenly
faltered with his talking, and with worried countenance, looked nervously
toward the crypt. So had the vicar. Something seemed to
press upon all the
folk around the table and everyone became silent.
The insects stopped chirping.
Tulu, who had been sniffing around at the entrance
of the crypt suddenly
whined, then barked as she bounded for the safety and company of the
people
around the table.
A sense of excitement welled up in Obi-Wan as he
stood behind Qui-Gon with
one hand on the Master's shoulder, as Qui-Gon sat and watched the crypt,
expectant.
A stronger sense of dread spread all around the
natives.
Dead silence.
Was something there? A face slowly formed
in the darkness of the crypt's
entryway. An ugly face. Ugly, not so much as a physical
aspect, but more
from the intense ugliness of the soul creating the visage. The
cadaverous
face was bloodless white. The mouth was gaping wide open as if
trying to
scream, but no sound came out. Eye sockets were pits of darkness.
The
expression was that of hideous fear. Malevolent fear shot out
from that
face and washed over the spectators like an ocean wave.
That tide of fear affected most of the people around
the table, including
the tembie. Some were gripping the table, hard, and trembling.
Others felt
sick, some were having trouble breathing. The only ones not affected
by the
fear were the Jedi, including Obi-Wan, who stared at it wide-eyed and
breathed, "Wow!".
Qui-Gon stood up and slowly walked toward the cadaverous
being. The ghoul
met the challenge by floating out of the darkness of the entranceway
toward
Qui-Gon, its body becoming more complete and solid; its unmoving feet
scraping through the grass. Plo Koon stood up and also walked
toward the
creature. Obi-Wan wasn't to be outdone in the courage department,
especially in front of the natives, so he too walked toward the ghoul.
Plo
Koon pushed his robe's hood off his head.
When the ghoul saw Koon's face, it stopped its approach.
The fear energy
stopped shooting from it, and a strange sound, perhaps physical, perhaps
mental came out of it. It sounded like surprise.
Plo Koon had a face that could stop a clock.
The cadaverous specter started to back up toward
the crypt entrance. Koon
became more aggressive in his strides as his eyes narrowed to dark
slits,
and his expression became fierce enough to have put a yellow streak
down the
back of a pro-wrestler. The specter wailed and was about to escape.
Qui-Gon could not suppress laughter as he threw a Force "net" around
the
ghostly cadaver. It failed to capture it however. The soul
behind the
image disappeared as if to another dimension, leaving the semi-physical
body. Before Qui-Gon could reach it, the body collapsed into
itself and
melted into a foul greasy looking puddle at the entrance of the crypt.
The
smell was nauseating, and it made Qui-Gon take a few steps back before
he
was able to throw a Force blanket over it to dampen and disperse the
stench.
"Well, that was thoroughly disgusting." said Qui-Gon
amicably.
"Sorry." Said Koon jokingly.
Qui-Gon chuckled. "Not you. I'm used
to you."
Obi-Wan carefully stepped over the mess and checked
the door. It was still
locked.
The folks around the table crept up to the crypt
and investigated the
puddle with disdain.
"Is that the end of it?" asked the mayor."
"I'm afraid not." said Plo Koon.
"Its spirit got away." said Qui-Gon. "It went
back into the crypt."
"What was this?" asked another, pointing to the
goo.
"I believe it's a physical manifestation created
by the spirit. We need to
get into the crypt." said Qui-Gon.
The vicar stepped up to the crypt door next to Obi-Wan.
"It just so
happens, I had the good sense today to keep the key handy." He
unlocked the
door, then, containing his fear, pushed the door open. Obi-Wan
was the
first to peek in, using his Force senses to see. Nothing untoward
was
there. Just the four caskets. Obi-Wan walked in with the
two elder Jedi on
his heels. Both Plo Koon and Qui-Gon immediately sensed that
the spirit
they had encountered had not belonged to any of the bodies laid here.
There
was an invisible opening to another dimension, and the spirit was using
it.
Perhaps the doorway was opened there long before
the cave was used as a crypt?
Qui-Gon could feel a spot of concentrated energy on one of the dais
that
had a casket. It may be the doorway. He looked at Koon,
who nodded back,
indicating that he felt the same thing. Obi-Wan also felt it,
and started
to walk toward it with hands stretched out before him as if he were
trying
to feel the texture of it. Qui-Gon laid a hand on Obi-Wan's shoulder
to
keep him back.
"Hold it, Obi-Wan." Qui-Gon wasn't going to
let his charge go before him.
Qui-Gon, in turn, was being protected by Plo Koon, who kept close.
Qui-Gon
stepped onto the bottom stone step, then stepped onto the second step.
Qui-Gon found himself falling through starry space.
Plo Koon jumped onto the same step in the effort
to follow his friend.
Obi-Wan saw both elder Jedi drop through what looked like solid physical
stone. He quickly leapt onto the step hoping to follow his elders.
During
the quick instant that he dropped, he was just barely able to glance
at the
thunderstruck looks of the townspeople before their physical world
disappeared, and he was dropping through space.
The mayor, vicar and others ran to the dais steps
and a few of them
gingerly touched the guilty step with a foot, but the step felt solid.
One
of them carefully stepped up, placing both feet on the step.
Nothing
happened. He started jumping on it, while another person stepped
onto it.
Nothing happened. The step was as solid stone.
"Does it work only for ghosts and Jedi?" asked one.
Another shrugged.
"How 'bout tembies?" asked another as they watched
Tulu sniff around and on
the steps, tail wagging. Nothing happened to her either.
Plo Koon had grabbed onto Qui-Gon as they fell.
They heard Obi-Wan's voice
and looked up to find Yoda's apprentice falling above them, reaching
out in
the effort to catch hold of one of the Masters. Both Koon and
Qui-Gon
reached up and grabbed Obi-Wan's hands, and they fell as a unit.
It was strange. For though it looked as if
they were in deep space, there
was a great amount of wind, as if they had fallen off the top of a
building
on Coruscant. Their cloaks and clothes, and Qui-Gon's hair whipped
upward
by the wind as they fell. The fact that they definitely had the
feeling
that they were falling down was also strange for space. There
was no
gravitational pull of a planet -- beneath their feet was endless starry
space. They were also breathing.
Someone started to scream, but it wasn't coming
from any of the Jedi.
Still falling, they looked around for the source of the scream, until
they
realized that it was coming from that malevolent spirit they had encountered
at the crypt. The spirit remained invisible, but it continued
to scream in
the effort to frighten the Jedi. But it didn't work. The
Jedi weren't
frightened at all; only perplexed. What frustrated the spirit
further was
the fact that the boy was having fun.
The ineffectual screaming eventually died off.
It was effort wasted.
Something was changing around the Jedi. The stars disappeared
and the
black of space became pure white. The descent halted, not in
a jarring way
-- they suddenly just found themselves to be no longer falling.
They were
standing in a space of white nothingness. There was no hard floor
beneath
their feet, but they were standing nonetheless. The Jedi straightened
their
clothes.
"I know what's happening." said Qui-Gon. "That
spirit is trying to scare
us. It seems to exist for the purpose of creating fear."
"Why?" asked Obi-Wan
"That I don't know."
"Some souls live off of the fear of others." said
Plo Koon. "They thrill
in it."
As Plo Koon was speaking, a solid image of a skeletal
demon appeared before
them, holding a drawing in front of it. Its head was very blurred,
almost
to the point of being vaporous. Its talons curved around the
edges of the
picture. For each Jedi that viewed the picture, the picture was
different,
and each Jedi knew that by the thoughts conveyed among them.
The picture
depicted a scene that was supposed to disturb the viewer. But
the Jedi
gazed upon it and the demon before them with interest, and without
the
reaction the spirit hoped for.
The spirit gave up. The demon image was fading
away, but Qui-Gon said,
"Come back here." in an authoritative tone. Confused, the demon
image came
back.
"We're not finished looking at the pictures yet."
"Stars and damnation!" exclaimed the demon, " What
must I do to cause you
to fear me?!"
Plo Koon asked, "Why is it, that you want to frighten
us?"
The demon looked at Plo Koon rather enviously and
said, "If I looked like
you, I could frighten anybody."
"Why, thank you!" said Koon as Qui-Gon laughed.
"We met in a dark alley." quipped Qui-Gon
"Why do you want to frighten people?" asked Plo
Koon.
Qui-Gon sensed that no one had ever encountered
the demon on this level
before, and asked, "What, or who were you before?"
The spirit was uncertain about what to do.
He had failed with those three
with what had worked fine with others. Then surprised him further
by
following him and added insult to injury by ordering him back and grilling
him. He hid his frustration by growling, then he abruptly disappeared.
The Jedi knew that the spirit was not coming back.
They looked around at
their space of white nothingness.
Plo Koon asked, "Do you think it's been a wasted
effort on our part?"
Qui-Gon looked doubtful. "Well, I don't know if
we accomplished anything.
Take my hand Obi-Wan. Let's see if we can find our way out of
here."
They found themselves floating, rather than walking, as they searched
for a
way out.
"Let's go that way." said Plo Koon , his finger
pointing in the direction
where he felt was the crypt. "I feel the presence of a door over
there."
They floated toward where Plo Koon had pointed. As they traveled,
the
sound of muted voices met their ears. They came upon an almost
imperceptible window of wavering energy. Plo Koon carefully stuck
his arm
through. As he did, the voices on the other side seemed to get
excited.
Koon pulled his arm back in. He looked at his companions and
shrugged.
"We may as well go through. I can't sense
what's on the other side, for
some reason."
"Neither can I." said Qui-Gon, "But we may as well
go through." Qui-Gon
put his arm through, then his hand and shoulders as though he were
climbing
out a window. The voices he was hearing became recognizable as
those
belonging to the townspeople. The dimensional door felt strange
to him. He
felt as if he were going through a birth canal. Warm hands suddenly
grabbed
his arm and pulled.
Qui-Gon found himself being pulled out by the town
leaders. It was, at
first, disorienting to him because he had entered the dimensional door
as if
it were a window on a vertical wall, yet he came up out of a horizontal
step. He still had a strong hold of Obi-Wan's hand and began
pulling. The
townspeople helped, and Obi-Wan was pulled out from the solid looking
step.
He blinked several times after he stood on his feet.
Qui-Gon waited for the appearance of Plo Koon.
He thought he could reach
down through the step, but his hand met with solid stone. He
was worried
that the door had closed until his friend's hand suddenly popped up
from the
stone. Qui-Gon and Obi-Wan grabbed onto it and pulled.
With the
over-zealousness of the townsfolk trying to help, Plo Koon was thrown
up
into the air. His Jedi reflexes took over and he made a graceful
somersault
in the air before landing on his feet.
"That felt weird." said he.
"What happened?" asked the mayor, excitedly.
"We talked with that spirit," said Qui-Gon, "but
we don't know if he's gone
away permanently."
"The spirit was not willing to converse. He
disappeared when we started
asking him questions." said Koon.
I think the best we can do is close the door." suggested
Qui-Gon.
The mayor screwed up his face and bounced the key
on the palm of his hand.
"But we already know that that doesn't work!"
"Not that door." Qui-Gon pointed to the stone
step. "This door. This is
a door to another dimension, and it might keep the ghost away if we
close
it. Close the door Obi-Wan."
"Huh? I? I've never closed a dimensional
door." admitted Obi-Wan.
"After today, you'll have a new skill to add to
your collection."
"How do I start?"
"Connect yourself mentally with the door."
Obi-Wan closed his eyes and concentrated.
He could feel the spot of
otherworldly energy through the Force senses. Plo Koon and Qui-Gon
also
closed their eyes to monitor the activity.
Qui-Gon softly murmured, "In your mind, picture
the door closing using the
Force."
To add clarity to his task, Obi-Wan placed his hand
on the step. The step
was cold and hard to his touch, but his Jedi senses felt the swirling
energy
beneath as if the stone were a thin barrier between this world and
another.
He pictured and willed in his mind the door getting smaller and smaller.
The doorway obeyed. The door closed until it became a pinpoint
dot which
then Obi-Wan fused closed.
"Now put a Force lock on it, strong, so that no
one could open it from the
other side, or from this side either, unless it is opened by you."
Obi-Wan took the concept from his Force shield ability
and forged a sturdy
lock around the fused door, and left his signature on it. Judging
by his
past experiences with this strong talent, no one should be able to
break it
until he opens it.
Plo Koon nodded his approval, and Qui-Gon grunted
in satisfaction.
"Good work Obi-Wan." said Qui-Gon.
Obi-Wan smiled in a subdued manner, careful not
to appear improperly giddy
in front of the townsfolk.
Then Qui-Gon said to the group, "This dimensional
door is closed. That
spirit should not bother you anymore, unless there is another door
opened
somewhere."
"What if, by chance he does come back again, what
then?"
"First of all, don't be afraid of him. He
feeds on fear. The more you
react to him, the more he's going to act. He can't hurt you --
but he wants
you to think he can." Qui-Gon smiled. "If you want to get
his goat, make
him a tourist attraction."
The next day was spent in honor of the Jedi.
They were breakfasted,
entertained and lunched with the best that region had to offer.
And they
were, of course, asked repeatedly to tell the tale of their adventure
in
"the other side". Apart from the description of what it was like,
the Jedi
felt that the events that took place weren't all that exciting, but
people
kept wanting to hear it over and over again. And the vicar, mayor
and the
others who had been in the crypt would tell with great drama about
how they
pulled the Jedi out of the stone.
When the Jedi arrived back on Coruscant, they gave
their report as usual.
Yoda did not ask further questions pertaining to Obi-Wan. This
was one of
the few times that the future revealed itself clearly. He bided
his time.
Alice J. Capen
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